Kindergarten Writer's Workshop mini-lesson A. Mueller.avi

Kindergarten Writer's Workshop mini-lesson A. Mueller.avi



now the last couple of weeks we have been doing a lot of riding during work Writers Workshop remember we've been thinking about things and then we have been getting our riders folder riding us drawing a picture riding our story and then we have to some of our friends share we're going to do that and again today if I want you guys to think for a second about the book that we read earlier you guys remember yep the hook about today I feel silly because when I was reading this book I was thinking I remember a time when I felt very silly very good very good so I want you guys I want you guys to look up here on the paper but it's the first thing that I'm going to do is I'm going to write my so I'm going to draw my picture and then I'm going to write my my story for you guys and then you're going to get a turn to tell about a time when you felt very silly okay alright so before I get started everybody check your leg and then you have trail oil and in your lap all right know when you are riding and the first thing you always do is write in that yeah happy write your name what do you do and now you go ahead you draw your picture very good and every type of drawing a picture what it always tell you you kiss your brain so smart in regarding ok so my story is about a time when I was feeling there if I get steel if I get still me and do not wash my eyes up here now remember this is my story so I'm going to put my story on the paper and I want you guys to just watch me because in a minute you'll have a term to do the same thing at your desk ok ok alright so it's time that I was very feeling alright so I'm going to start out by drawing me and when we talked about what you can watch my hair is brown hi brown my Oh and today what colors my shirt guy like in my head and white and black I feel down you'll see some brown line that is a little bit all right so my shirt is going to be black because I'm thinking about a day that I also had on this shirt it was last Sunday I'm going to tell you about in just a second but I had on this shirt and I was with let me get my special and I have all kinds of little designs on my shirt can't forget the earrings okay I have all that folks can't put in my pocket alright so there's me there's me but here's the thing I wasn't by myself when I was being silly I was with my daughter and you guys remember what color hair she has hair so we were together outside of the house so that's what I'm going to draw and she has a green eye and she always loved to wear dresses well she had on a red dress that day I'm going to draw a picture of her in her red dress and it had poked it off told me that family polkadot okay kindergarten right now this is my short stick quietly okay and we were outside of my house by this big huge tree it's such a big tree that my son when he is out there with us he likes to climb it and he likes to climb up in the tree but he wasn't there with us it was just me and Mallory and we were outside playing but you know how we were being silly let me tell you cuz I have my picture and I have some details if I wanted to I could draw my house but we were specifically by the tree which is why I drew the tree now when we were outside we were being so silly we were playing a game called big blue have you guys ever heard of that game okay so we were playing a game big blue so my sentence is going to say me and Mallory played big blue so this is what you do just like what we've been talking about when you're trying to figure out how to run where you're going to start all you're going to start your story all the way over here and you're going to say the work slowly to figure out what sound you hear now also one of the things we have been talking about is spaces you guys remember that every time you finish a word you're going to put in Spain before you put write the next word yes ma'am so here is my story me me em me okay there's one word I'm going to bit of stick with my finger and the best face Mallory oh she also starts with it him Mallory on me and Mallory okay that makes sense of all right me and Mallory play oh that's like hit remember P boy okay and I'm out of room I'm out of room there so I'm going to come all the way back me and Mallory play something big – remember this is Mac story okay this is good big and then I'm going to put a face and blue like that's one of our color work that we've been around and that's right it's the lue blue2 okay so the fire always goes back and read their story again to make sure that you have it all down make sure that everything that you aren't thinking up here came out on your paper me and Mallory play big blue that mixed in and that was very very silly you know why I love Mary Miller because when we were playing big blue both of us got so tickled we were laughing so hard that we fell down and just laid on the ground and started giggling guys I'm going to ride that real fast well I saw Laura have me and Mallory play big blue what wait I'm gonna put my face look freeze face good scotch good good all we got so tickles hmm not my friend Tony that's like a dinosaur tickled okay check your leg check your leg we got so tickled I'm out of space so I'm going to come all the way back over here that and I'm putting my finger there what's that called face whoops we stay here spell oh that's like remember we fell in there are numbers going wait till everybody feel and sitting up right up here that least failed just sit down there's my face again thanks and oh I'm out of space here so I'm going to cut back all the way around started laughing oh that's like what enjoy the word wall laughing okay all right okay so now remember what a good writer does they go back and a good writer goes back to read your story again to make sure it makes sense me and Mallory played a big blue we got so tickled that we fell down and started laughing thumbs up or thumbs down does that make sense absolutely all right don't want you guys to think about something that you did where you were so silly that something that happened that you were just laughing and laughing because you were so doing everybody close your eyes think about a time that you were so silly amber close your eyes okay when you have an idea raise your hand the time that you were so feeling so silly Joshua just just take a Joshua after that you come and tell me your idea I'm going to give you your paper and you can go ride it okay what's the birthday you do you write your name what do you do tell me what was the time I ran outside how would that fit what did you do that was silly all right take this back to your table go get started all right somebody else the time that was so Billy but you can think up in your head DJ just trying to get a football that's perfect that is very silly now everyone else I want you to turn to your neighbor and tell them a time that you were so silly and that's it is enjoyment I would you want to friend at that time that you are so silly that you just laugh and laugh and laugh share your

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