Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money

Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money



I am Kiran mucker and here I am going to discuss with you an essay which is important both for the general training and the academic IELTS exams it has been seen in the general training exam in the past nowadays some celebrities such as film stars sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money do you agree or disagree which jobs should be highly paid introduction the high income of celebs in the field of sports and entertainment have always been a matter of dispute I agree that they are getting high remuneration for what they are doing but I also firmly believe that they well deserve it in the following paragraphs I shall put my arguments to support my opinion and also suggest some other jobs which should be highly paid here I've used the word celebs celebs can be used for celebrities it's a complete word and then my first paragraph goes my first argument in favor of the high salaries of these celebrities is that they have a major contribution in the lives of people they provide entertainment and inspiration and they also bring name and fame to our country they are role models for the society and people follow them and listen to them secondly they have a very short career span most of the people in the sports and entertainment field start their career at the age of 19 to 20 and retire by 33 to 35 years whatever these celebs earn is during these few years and after that they face struggle next paragraph my final argument is that these celebs sacrifice their personal life completely and so they do deserve these high salaries they cannot enjoy the common things of life like the common man does they are always followed by the paparazzi and their children to always need security this is too much price to pay for the high salaries they receive here I've used the word paparazzi paparazzi is a spoke is used for those photographers or journalists who always follow the celebrities in order to get a scoop some good news by which they can increase the rating of their Channel TV channel or the newspaper the next paragraph is there are many other which require high salaries doctors teachers and nurses also serve the humanity and deserve higher salaries then there are people working in our defense services such as the Army Navy and Air Force because of them we are leading secure lives that is why they deserve higher pay packages furthermore people working in the high risk professions high risk professions such as firefighters and security guards should be paid more and finally people in administrative force such as IES and IPS officers should have higher salaries to sum up people in the field of sports and entertainment well deserve their high incomes however there are many other professions which also deserve high salaries the plan I followed in my says in the introduction I have agreed with the given statement in paragraph one I have given why they deserve the high salaries that they receive and in para to also have given more reasons why they deserve their high salary and in the third paragraph I have given other professions which require higher salaries this is because it was asked in the question essay question which other professions should be given more salaries and then I have concluded by reiterating my opinion thank you very much hope you enjoy

2 Comments

  • Pragya Singh says:

    Maam can u just write about for or against anyone on this topic that sports stars are paid too much money

  • GODSON Creations says:

    I don't agree that Celebs sacrifice their personal life completely… Actually they are the people who are leading a royal life in this earth ..

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